Special thanks to Onkar for featuring my story today.
If you get a chance check out Waiting For Flight 175 on The Literary Yard at:
https://literaryyard.com/2020/01/28/waiting-for-flight-175/
I've also posted it below. Enjoy
Waiting For Flight 175
A crowd of humanity
surged through the concourse like a tidal river rushing down a coastal inlet. At
gate 23 in the waiting area for flight 175 people settled themselves into the
seats, leaving as much space as they could between themselves and the people
around them. As departure time drew nearer more and more passengers arrived,
filling the seats one by one until none were left, leaving the late arrivals
standing wherever they could, rocking back and forth on their heels, looking
around and trying not to make eye contact.
Larry Gustafson sat in the last seat in his row out by
the concourse trying to read a short story by a favorite author. It was hard to
concentrate.
Next to him a middle aged, paunchy guy in a red turtle
neck stood up. His shirt was neatly tucked into grey dress pants which were accessorized
by a shiny burgundy belt and with a silver buckle. He addressed the woman next
to him who was quietly reading a newspaper.
"I've had something fatty to eat and something salty
to eat," he stated to her. "Now I need something sweet to eat."
He paused, his pronouncements hanging in the air proudly like flags waving. He
stood watching her, waiting for her to look up. "Maybe some water too,"
he added, making it seem like he had arrived at this conclusion after much
deliberation.
Larry cast a quick glance in their direction. The guy was
nervously shuffling his feet, staring at his traveling companion, hands
twitching at his side.
"Well, go get something then," she suggested
without looking up, slowly turning the page. Larry noticed it was the front
section of the local newspaper. She shook it to straighten out a wrinkle and continued
reading.
"Where should I go?" The guy asked, not taking his
eyes off her. All around people were walking into and out of the area, restlessly
waiting for the plane to begin boarding. It was going to be awhile. Larry
glanced at his watch. They had a good twenty minutes. "Maybe I should get
a candy bar."
He looked down her again. She was dressed comfortably in
loose fitting tan slacks and a beige blouse which nearly hid a thin, gold chain
necklace. She had rings on most of her fingers and a prominent, diamond studded
one that was most likely a wedding ring on her left hand. She was quite tan,
which was surprising given it was February in Minnesota. Larry got the feeling
maybe they were just passing through. But then again maybe not. Maybe she had
been tanning for the last month or so, getting ready for a vacation to Las Vegas,
the destination of the flight.
"What do you think?" The guy asked, nervously
putting his hands in his pockets and jingling what sounded like a bunch of
coins. After a few moments he took out a
wad of bills that he unrolled and started counting with a practiced manner that
indicted it was a task he did often. Then he put them back in his pocket.
She folded the paper and rested it on her knee. She
raised her hand and patted her hair, which was light brown and tastefully
frosted. Her lipstick was deep red, almost maroon, and matched the color of her
fingernails. She appeared well off and looked to be the same age as the guy,
nearly sixty. "Maybe get a candy bar?" she asked. "Like a Snickers?"
"I don't know," the guy pondered, seriously considering
her suggestion. "I'm not sure about the nuts."
"Then how about a Hersey's? she replied.
"They're just chocolate."
"Hmm..." he said, thinking.
Larry had forgotten all about his book and was now surreptitiously
watching the entire conversation out of the corner of his eye. The guy put a hand
to his chin and rubbed it and then slid it to the back of his neck, massaging
the skin vigorously. He was smooth shaven and his complexion was an unhealthy
mix of ruddy and pale, not like his traveling companion's at all.
"I don't know," he finally said. "I'm just
not sure what I want." HIs eyes were blinking rapidly, his confusion
genuine.
Just do it! Larry
wanted to scream. It's only a friggin'
candy bar for christ's sake. But he didn't. He just watched and listened,
becoming drawn in to the couple and the drama being played out.
"You know there's a kiosk just down the concourse to
the right," she said, pointing.
"There is?"
"Yes. Why don't you go look?"
Nervously contemplating her suggestion, the guy rubbed
his hands together like he was dry washing them. Then he crossed in front of
Larry and stepped to the edge of the concourse, looking down toward the kiosk.
The flow of people swerved around him without missing a beat. He stepped back
saying, "Maybe I will." And then stood there looking at her, shoving
his hands in his pockets again, fiddling with his money some more.
The guy's shoes were nicely polished, dark brown
wing-tips. Larry thought they were a nice juxtaposition to the tan work boots
he was wearing. The contrast of colors looked kind of pleasing together, he thought,
as he carefully moved his boots out of the way, not wanting the guy to trip.
The guy's traveling companion looked up at him and opened
her paper, shaking it once to straighten it out. "If you go, get me a
bottle of water please."
"What kind?" the guy asked.
She was quiet for a long time. By now Larry felt like he
was part of the conversation and had some small vested interest in her answer.
Really. What kind of water did she want?
Finally she gave a slight cough, turned to a new page and
said, "Doesn't matter."
Larry didn't' realize he'd been holding his breath. He
let it out and felt a sense of relief. But it was only momentary.
"Really?" the guy said, questioning her.
"Really? It doesn't matter?"
"No. Any kind will do. But you should hurry."
She glanced at her watch. "We'll be boarding soon."
"Geez." the guy said, looking at his own watch
now, getting quite anxious. "Do you think I'll have time?"
Her eyes shifted to the next page. "If you
hurry."
"Ok," the guy said, turning to leave.
"I'll be right back."
He hurriedly left, merging quickly into the flow of
people. Larry leaned over in his chair and watched him, finding himself
concerned that the guy was going to be safe. He surprised himself that he cared
so much. When the guy was out of sight, he repositioned himself in his chair
and shot a quick glance toward the lady. She was engrossed in her paper, an air
of calm around her, concentrating on her reading but also at ease, like this
sort of thing with the guy happened all the time and she was so used to it that
it didn't even faze her. Larry turned back to his book. He tried to put the
couple out of his mind so he could focus on the story he had started. It was
hard to do. He was just starting to read when the guy returned. He surprised
himself by realizing he was relieved the guy made it back okay.
"Look at this water I got," he said, excitedly,
sitting down and taking a plastic bottle out of the small bag he was carrying.
"It's the best."
Larry glanced over. He had to admit he was curious. The
guy was handing her a bottle with a label he was unfamiliar with. Not Evian,
Clear Mountain or Poland Springs. It was some French name he'd never heard of and
the shape was slightly different from most bottled water, this one being
thinner and taller.
"Thank you," she said, setting it on the floor,
going back to her reading.
The guy sat down and twisted the top off, taking a long
drink. When he was finished he smacked his lips. "Boy, that tastes really
good." He turned toward her, "I didn't realize I was so thirty."
He started drinking some more.
"Be careful how much you drink," she said
without looking up, continuing to read. "You know how you hate to use the
bathrooms on airplanes."
The guy stopped drinking and his leg started jiggling up
and down. "Oh, boy," he said, agitated. "I didn't think about
that."
She glanced at her watch. "You can use the bathroom
here on the concourse, if you want, before we board. You don't mind
those."
"Yeah," he said, sounding relieved.
"That's a good idea."
She smiled and patted him on his arm. He seemed to calm
down. "Did you get your candy bar?"
"I did." He reached into the bag and pulled it
out, showing it to her. "What do you think?"
"A Hersey bar. All chocolate. That's a good choice."
"A Hersey bar. All chocolate. That's a good choice."
"Do you think I should eat it now?"
"Yes," she answered and then turned back to her
paper. "You don't want it to melt and make a mess."
"Good idea." He pealed back the paper and bit
into the bar, clearly savoring the chocolaty flavor. When he was half way
through he leaned over, offering her some, "Do you want a piece? It's
pretty good."
"No. I'm fine," she said, setting the paper
aside and making it a point to look at her watch again. "You should finish
up and use the bathroom. I think we may start boarding soon."
And, just like that, over the loud speaker the gate
attendant announced early boarding for those needing assistance. The general
boarding would begin in a few minutes.
"Oh, boy. Do you think I'll have time?" he
asked, suddenly very nervous. He quickly stuffed the remainder of the Hersey bar
in his mouth, chewing rapidly and crumpling up the wrapper.
She patted his hand reassuringly. "I'm sure you have
time, dear." She said. The term of affection seemed to point to the fact
that they were married, something Larry had been wondering about. "Why
don't you go now? I'll wait right here for you."
The guy stood up hesitantly and looked at her. "Are
you sure about the time?"
She smiled reassuringly. "Yes, I am. You go to the
bathroom and hurry back. I won't go anywhere. I promise."
"Ok, then." he said, moving toward the
concourse, glancing back at her. "Promise?"
"Yes, dear. Just hurry." she pointed to her
watch.
"Ok, then. Bye."
"Bye."
Larry watched as the guy slipped into a break in the crowd
and then was swept away. He leaned over and watched until he was out of sight.
The last thing he saw was the guy cutting through the sea of people, heading
for the men's room. Larry thought about getting up to follow him, but it looked
like he was going to make it all right. Satisfied that the guy was okay, he
settled back in his seat, checking that he had his boarding pass. The lady folded
up her newspaper and put it in a small carry-on bag. She took out a tin of
Altoids and popped one in her mouth, snapping the top shut. She noticed Larry
watching her.
"Mint?" she asked, offering the tin to him.
Embarrassed, Larry stammered, "Ah, no. Thanks
though." He felt his ears turning red.
She smiled at him. "Going to Vegas?"
She seemed very nice. Pleasant. Larry felt himself becoming
drawn in to talking with her. "Well, yes," he said, his embarrassment
fading. "I'm meeting my brother there. He's picking me up and we're
driving to where he lives."
"He's from Vegas?"
"No. South. Two and a half hours. Lake Havasu City."
She nodded her head. "It's nice down there."
"I've never been. First time."
"You'll have a great time." She was watching
the concourse now, looking for the guy.
"Are you and your husband going to Vegas?" he
asked, curious if he had guessed correctly and they were married.
"Yes." She smiled. "We're celebrating our fortieth
anniversary.
Question answered. "Well, congratulations," he
said, meaning it."That's something to be proud of." He knew of no
couples who'd been married that long.
She smiled at him and ran her hands over her slacks,
smoothing them. "It is," she said. "He's a good man."
Just then her husband rushed into the waiting area and
stood in front of her. "Whew. I thought I was going to be late." He
leaned down and kissed the top of her head. "There was a line in the
bathroom and I didn't know if I should stay there or leave. Finally a stall
opened up and I used it, but it seemed to take forever to go. You know...,"
he said, looking around, embarrassed. "Then I wanted to wash my hands but
the water took forever to come on. Finally it did." He paused, agitated.
"I hate those automatic faucets."
His wife reached up and patted his arm. "Well,
you're here right how. You can just relax." And, just like that, at the
touch of her hand, the guy calmed down. "I've been talking to this nice
gentleman here," she said, indicating Larry.
Larry looked up at the guy and smiled. "Hi."
"Hello," the guy said, cautiously.
"I'm Larry," he said, putting out his hand.
The guy took a moment before shaking it, and glanced at his
wife who nodded, like it's okay. "Steve," he said. "My name's
Steve."
"Nice to meet you, Steve," Larry said.
In the background the call for boarding began. "And
this is my wife, Susan," he added.
"Hi Susan," Larry said, shaking her hand, introductions
now complete. "I hope you both have a great trip and a wonderful
anniversary." He meant it.
Steve gave his wife a questioning look. "I'll fill
you in when we're seated, dear," she said as she stood, picking up her
carry-on. "It's our turn to board," she looked at her husband with
affection and put her arm through his. Then she turned to Larry. "You have
a good trip," she said, smiling. "Have fun with your brother."
"I will."
Steve and Susan moved into line. Larry stood up but hung
back waiting for his section to be called. He watched the couple as they inched
forward toward the gate and then down the runway. He saw Steve's head bobbing
along, dipping occasionally as he said something to his wife. They seemed like a
nice couple and something about them and how they were with each other made him
feel good. It was a feeling that might be worth exploring. They rounded a
corner and then were out of sight. His boarding section was called and he moved
into line, putting his book into his carry-on, forgetting about the story he
had been reading, thinking instead about Steve and Susan. He wouldn't mind at
all if, by chance, he ended up being seated next to them for the flight to
Vegas. And why not? He hadn't even left the airport and already his trip was
memorable. Who knew what lay ahead?
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